OK page 2. There isn't that much to this page. It is basically to show that Sam's dad has been training him since a very young age, and that he was trying to teach him more than just fighting. One of the first things I decided to do when I came up with the idea for this short story was to have little to no dialogue on these first 7 pages, but I felt this page would have been too odd without any dialogue.For the most part I really liked how this page turned. I really love those first two panels, but the third is a little funky, and the fourth is fine, but I thought I cut Sam's Dad head at a weird place. But yah, there you go.
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